Beth (prettyshinies) wrote in onceupona,
Beth
prettyshinies
onceupona

Here's a poem

Flight

I saw a butterfly with a torn wing
But it could still fly
Its flight even more beautiful for that
Erratic and entrancing
So delicate and frail
And somehow so strong
Sheer strength of will suspending it midair
It circled, flirting with me as I passed
An imperfect blur of black and deep blue
Ethereal and mangled


I'm not sure if I'm done with it, yet. So any input/critique/suggestions you can give is very welcome.
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